During our pitch we received feedback from the audience; allowing us to develop our opening sequence:
Main Highlighted points and feedback from the audience:
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- The main character ( reason behind age)
- The films ending (is there a plot twist?)
we discussed the following changes and
concluded that they should be made within our film;
We are not going to show the protagonist's death as due to the lack of equipment it would be extremely hard to show at a high level shot.
we also had a change on our plot change adding a sense of realism with victims being discovered after 3 years making the re-open; giving the protagonist reasons to solve it.
Furthermore we believed that the protagonist needed different characteristics/personality more specifically his age.
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